Plain Language Review: [document or page name]
Plain language review record for public-facing text such as letters,
notices, forms, web pages and instructions: readers and their task,
a checklist organised by the four governing principles of ISO
24495-1:2023, Plain language, Part 1 (relevant, findable,
understandable, usable), before and after measurements, a rewrite log,
reader testing and accuracy sign-off. The standard is cited, not
reproduced: every check below is original wording. Where a law requires
plain writing, section 9 lists dated EU, UK and US examples. Replace
every [bracketed] value and every row marked Example. This is a
documentation format, not legal advice.
Document control
| Field | Value |
|---|
| Review ID | [PLR-NNN] |
| Document reviewed | [name, version or URL] |
| Document owner | [@owner] |
| Plain language reviewer | [@reviewer] |
| Subject matter or legal reviewer | [@reviewer] |
| Status | [Draft / In review / Approved / Published] |
| Last updated | YYYY-MM-DD |
| Next review | YYYY-MM-DD or [when the underlying rule changes] |
Revision history
| Version | Date | Change | By |
|---|
| 0.1 | YYYY-MM-DD | Review started, readers and task defined | [@reviewer] |
| 1.0 | YYYY-MM-DD | Rewrite approved after reader testing | [@owner] |
1. Readers, task and context
| Item | Answer |
|---|
| Primary readers | [who, including language, literacy and access needs] |
| Secondary readers | [advisers, carers, translators, staff who answer calls] |
| Reader's task | [what the reader must know or do after reading] |
| Context of use | [device, place, time pressure, emotional state] |
| Consequence of misunderstanding | [missed payment, lost benefit, safety risk] |
| Channel and format | [letter, email, web page, form, SMS] |
| Languages and translation | [source language, target languages] |
Example: Ferncliff Water Authority (fictional) sends a late payment
notice to household customers. Primary readers are account holders,
including people who read English as a second language and people in
financial difficulty. The task is to pay by the due date or call before
it to arrange a payment plan. Misunderstanding can lead to a fee and a
supply restriction, so the notice is tested with readers (section 6).
2. Review method
- Confirm readers and task (section 1) with the document owner.
- Check relevance and structure first (principles 1 and 2).
- Rewrite sentences and words (principle 3), logging each change.
- Check usability: actions, layout and accessibility (principle 4).
- Measure before and after (section 4).
- Test with readers (section 6) and revise.
- Obtain accuracy and legal sign-off (section 7), then publish.
3. Checklist by principle
3.1 Relevant: readers get what they need
| ID | Check | Result | Note |
|---|
| PL-R-01 | The purpose of the document is clear in the first two sentences | [Pass / Fail / N/A] | |
| PL-R-02 | Everything the reader needs for the task is included | | |
| PL-R-03 | Content the reader does not need is removed or moved to an annex | | |
| PL-R-04 | The document type suits the task (letter, form, guide, FAQ) | | |
| PL-R-05 | The tone suits the reader's situation and the relationship | | |
3.2 Findable: readers can easily find what they need
| ID | Check | Result | Note |
|---|
| PL-F-01 | The most important information comes first | | |
| PL-F-02 | Headings are informative (say what the section tells or asks) | | |
| PL-F-03 | Related information is grouped; one topic per section | | |
| PL-F-04 | Deadlines, amounts and contact details stand out visually | | |
| PL-F-05 | Long documents have a contents list or summary | | |
3.3 Understandable: readers can easily understand it
| ID | Check | Result | Note |
|---|
| PL-U-01 | Words are familiar to the readers; technical terms are explained on first use | | |
| PL-U-02 | Sentences are short and carry one main idea | | |
| PL-U-03 | Active voice names who does what, unless the actor is unknown | | |
| PL-U-04 | The reader is addressed as "you" and the organisation as "we" | | |
| PL-U-05 | One term is used for one thing throughout | | |
| PL-U-06 | Numbers, dates and amounts are written in a consistent, unambiguous form | | |
| PL-U-07 | Abbreviations are spelled out on first use or avoided | | |
3.4 Usable: readers can easily use it
| ID | Check | Result | Note |
|---|
| PL-S-01 | Actions are stated as instructions, in the order the reader does them | | |
| PL-S-02 | The reader knows what happens next and who to contact | | |
| PL-S-03 | Layout, font size and contrast support reading (WCAG 2.2 SC 1.4.3 for web text) | | |
| PL-S-04 | Headings and lists use real structure, not visual formatting only (WCAG 2.2 SC 1.3.1) | | |
| PL-S-05 | Link text says where the link goes (WCAG 2.2 SC 2.4.4) | | |
| PL-S-06 | Readers have tested the document and succeeded at the task (section 6) | | |
4. Before and after measurements
| Measure | Before | After | Note |
|---|
| Words in passage | [N] | [N] | |
| Sentences | [N] | [N] | |
| Average words per sentence | [N.N] | [N.N] | |
| Longest sentence (words) | [N] | [N] | |
| Passive constructions | [N] | [N] | |
| Undefined technical terms | [N] | [N] | |
| [Readability score, tool and version] | [score] | [score] | [indicative only] |
Example: The payment paragraph of the Ferncliff notice.
| Measure | Before | After |
|---|
| Words in passage | 87 | 68 |
| Sentences | 3 | 6 |
| Average words per sentence | 29.0 | 11.3 |
| Longest sentence (words) | 42 | 19 |
| Passive constructions | 4 | 0 |
The rewrite is 22% shorter (19 fewer words out of 87), and the average
sentence length fell from 29.0 to 11.3 words.
5. Rewrite log
| ID | Location | Before | After | Check | Reason |
|---|
| [RW-NNN] | [section, paragraph] | [original text] | [new text] | [PL-x-NN] | [why] |
| RW-001 (Example) | Payment paragraph, sentence 1 | "Please be advised that in accordance with the provisions of the Customer Charter, failure to remit the outstanding balance indicated above within the period specified herein may result in the imposition of a late payment fee and the possible suspension of service." | "Please pay 84.20 by 15 March. If you pay late, we will add a late fee of 5.00 and we may stop your water supply." | PL-F-01, PL-U-02, PL-U-03 | Action and deadline first; one idea per sentence |
| RW-002 (Example) | Payment paragraph, sentence 2 | "Customers who are experiencing financial hardship are encouraged to make contact with the Authority prior to the due date in order that consideration may be given to the establishment of an alternative payment arrangement." | "If you cannot pay in full, call us on 0100 555 0199 before 15 March. We can set up a payment plan." | PL-U-03, PL-U-04, PL-S-02 | Speak to the reader; say who acts and how to get help |
| RW-003 (Example) | Payment paragraph, sentence 3 | "Payments may be made by any of the methods listed overleaf." | "You can pay online, by phone or at our office. The ways to pay are on the back of this letter." | PL-U-01, PL-U-03 | "Overleaf" is unfamiliar to many readers; name the methods |
| RW-004 (Example) | Heading | "Notice of Arrears" | "You have a bill to pay by 15 March" | PL-F-02 | Heading states the message, not the document type |
6. Reader testing
| Item | Plan |
|---|
| Method | [task-based interview / paraphrase test / remote unmoderated test] |
| Participants | [N, recruited how, matching which reader profile] |
| Tasks | [find the amount, find the deadline, say what happens if late, say how to get help] |
| Success criterion | [Example: at least 5 of 6 participants complete each task without help] |
| Accessibility | [screen reader users, large print, translated version] |
| Consent and privacy | [consent form, no personal data in notes] |
| Task | Round 1 result | Problem seen | Change | Round 2 result |
|---|
| [task] | [N of N succeeded] | [what went wrong] | [RW-NNN] | [N of N] |
| Example: Say what happens if you pay late | 3 of 6 | Readers did not link "suspension of service" to their water supply | RW-001 | 6 of 6 |
7. Accuracy, legal and accessibility sign-off
| Role | Name | Decision | Date |
|---|
| Subject expert | [name] | [Approved / Changes needed] | YYYY-MM-DD |
| Legal or policy reviewer | [name] | | YYYY-MM-DD |
| Document owner | [name] | | YYYY-MM-DD |
8. Findings summary and follow-up
| Item | Detail |
|---|
| Checks failed before rewrite | [N of N] |
| Checks failed after rewrite | [N of N] |
| Reader testing outcome | [summary] |
| Open items | [item, owner, due date] |
| Lessons for the style guide | [rule to add to writing/style-guide] |
9. Legal requirements: dated examples
Check the current official text and ask a qualified professional before
relying on any row for compliance. This is not legal advice.
10. References
- ISO 24495-1:2023, Plain language, Part 1: Governing principles and
guidelines (first edition, 2023). Official text: ISO, purchase or
licensed access: https://www.iso.org/standard/78907.html. This
template names its four governing principles and does not reproduce
its text or guidelines.
- W3C, Web Content Accessibility Guidelines (WCAG) 2.2, W3C
Recommendation, 12 December 2024: https://www.w3.org/TR/WCAG22/
(success criteria 1.3.1, 1.4.3, 2.4.4; 3.1.5 Reading Level is Level
AAA).
- Plain Writing Act of 2010, Public Law 111-274:
https://www.govinfo.gov/app/details/PLAW-111publ274
Standard and licence note
Structure aligned with the four governing principles of ISO 24495-1:2023
(relevant, findable, understandable, usable), which are named and
paraphrased only; the checklist, method and examples are original
wording. Legal examples are based on the Plain Writing Act of 2010 and
public government guidance as checked in October 2026. Check the current
official versions before relying on them. This is not legal advice.
Template licence: MIT.